Chapter	Reviewer	Review	Date
1	tptigger	Hee! I like. Tyzonn was an interesting choice for the um... "fully functional" conversation. (Ask Rose or Ronny... I fell over. Really fell over.) This is great, and I doubt the show will give us so satisfactory a resolution to this story arc on Monday. :)	11/10/2007
1	Jonathan, monkeyjb1988@yahoo.com	Great story. I thought it was heart-warming and thought provoking. I like how Tyzonn didn't hesitate to suggest Mack should practice with himself, Will, or Dax. Shows that aliens are more open minded than us humans. Great story, and I hop to read more from you soon.	11/15/2007
1	MrQuinn, pharris2k7@yahoo.com	I know I don't get out much these days in terms of fanfic, and while I wasn't the biggest fan of PROO, I thought this was great. Mack wrestling with the idea of not being human, and the conversations he had with everyone in an attempt to come to terms with it was well done. Not even Rose could tell him he wasn't human and explained that ACTUAL humans were just as much a mystery as he was. The thought of Andrew Hartford building other androids before Mack was compelling as well, it fills my mind with such ideas! I tip my hat you once and and bow to the greatness of your work.	04/25/2008